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I'm writing a historical work about a German philosopher, in which I use some of his unpublished notes.



One quotation contains an almost untranslatable, hardly intelligible expression - it's not essential to the point I'm making with the citation (which is perfectly clear), but by cutting it out using [...] I mangle the quotation even more.



Can I translate it literally (which turns into nonsense) and write [sic] behind it? After all, it's not what was actually written but my translation, so I feel like this isn't really an option. Or should I chose one of the different possible interpretations that make some sense of it, but thereby pushing some particular reading, even though I don't need that to make my point?










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    Make a choice that you can reasonably justify and explain that choice/justificaiton to the reader.

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    Yeah that's what I decided to do. Added the original text in a footnote and explained that it's not crucial to the point. Thanks!

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    @user2768 "Make a choice that you can reasonably justify and explain that choice/justificaiton to the reader." And then follow that up with a separate few pages paper, perhaps published elsewhere, on the conundrum, and several solutions you considered in the process!

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I'm writing a historical work about a German philosopher, in which I use some of his unpublished notes.



One quotation contains an almost untranslatable, hardly intelligible expression - it's not essential to the point I'm making with the citation (which is perfectly clear), but by cutting it out using [...] I mangle the quotation even more.



Can I translate it literally (which turns into nonsense) and write [sic] behind it? After all, it's not what was actually written but my translation, so I feel like this isn't really an option. Or should I chose one of the different possible interpretations that make some sense of it, but thereby pushing some particular reading, even though I don't need that to make my point?










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    Make a choice that you can reasonably justify and explain that choice/justificaiton to the reader.

    – user2768
    Feb 13 at 10:30






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    Yeah that's what I decided to do. Added the original text in a footnote and explained that it's not crucial to the point. Thanks!

    – mar_cel
    Feb 13 at 10:30






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    OP: consider accepting one of the answers posted below

    – aaaaaa
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    @user2768 "Make a choice that you can reasonably justify and explain that choice/justificaiton to the reader." And then follow that up with a separate few pages paper, perhaps published elsewhere, on the conundrum, and several solutions you considered in the process!

    – Alexis
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I'm writing a historical work about a German philosopher, in which I use some of his unpublished notes.



One quotation contains an almost untranslatable, hardly intelligible expression - it's not essential to the point I'm making with the citation (which is perfectly clear), but by cutting it out using [...] I mangle the quotation even more.



Can I translate it literally (which turns into nonsense) and write [sic] behind it? After all, it's not what was actually written but my translation, so I feel like this isn't really an option. Or should I chose one of the different possible interpretations that make some sense of it, but thereby pushing some particular reading, even though I don't need that to make my point?










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I'm writing a historical work about a German philosopher, in which I use some of his unpublished notes.



One quotation contains an almost untranslatable, hardly intelligible expression - it's not essential to the point I'm making with the citation (which is perfectly clear), but by cutting it out using [...] I mangle the quotation even more.



Can I translate it literally (which turns into nonsense) and write [sic] behind it? After all, it's not what was actually written but my translation, so I feel like this isn't really an option. Or should I chose one of the different possible interpretations that make some sense of it, but thereby pushing some particular reading, even though I don't need that to make my point?







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    Make a choice that you can reasonably justify and explain that choice/justificaiton to the reader.

    – user2768
    Feb 13 at 10:30






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    Yeah that's what I decided to do. Added the original text in a footnote and explained that it's not crucial to the point. Thanks!

    – mar_cel
    Feb 13 at 10:30






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    OP: consider accepting one of the answers posted below

    – aaaaaa
    Feb 13 at 17:23






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    @user2768 "Make a choice that you can reasonably justify and explain that choice/justificaiton to the reader." And then follow that up with a separate few pages paper, perhaps published elsewhere, on the conundrum, and several solutions you considered in the process!

    – Alexis
    Feb 13 at 17:26






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    Reminder: answer in answers, not in comments.

    – V2Blast
    Feb 13 at 18:58














  • 15





    Make a choice that you can reasonably justify and explain that choice/justificaiton to the reader.

    – user2768
    Feb 13 at 10:30






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    Yeah that's what I decided to do. Added the original text in a footnote and explained that it's not crucial to the point. Thanks!

    – mar_cel
    Feb 13 at 10:30






  • 1





    OP: consider accepting one of the answers posted below

    – aaaaaa
    Feb 13 at 17:23






  • 1





    @user2768 "Make a choice that you can reasonably justify and explain that choice/justificaiton to the reader." And then follow that up with a separate few pages paper, perhaps published elsewhere, on the conundrum, and several solutions you considered in the process!

    – Alexis
    Feb 13 at 17:26






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    Reminder: answer in answers, not in comments.

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Make a choice that you can reasonably justify and explain that choice/justificaiton to the reader.

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Feb 13 at 10:30





Make a choice that you can reasonably justify and explain that choice/justificaiton to the reader.

– user2768
Feb 13 at 10:30




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Yeah that's what I decided to do. Added the original text in a footnote and explained that it's not crucial to the point. Thanks!

– mar_cel
Feb 13 at 10:30





Yeah that's what I decided to do. Added the original text in a footnote and explained that it's not crucial to the point. Thanks!

– mar_cel
Feb 13 at 10:30




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OP: consider accepting one of the answers posted below

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OP: consider accepting one of the answers posted below

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@user2768 "Make a choice that you can reasonably justify and explain that choice/justificaiton to the reader." And then follow that up with a separate few pages paper, perhaps published elsewhere, on the conundrum, and several solutions you considered in the process!

– Alexis
Feb 13 at 17:26





@user2768 "Make a choice that you can reasonably justify and explain that choice/justificaiton to the reader." And then follow that up with a separate few pages paper, perhaps published elsewhere, on the conundrum, and several solutions you considered in the process!

– Alexis
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After all, it's not what was actually written but my translation, so I feel like this isn't really an option.




You seem to have unconsciously ruled out what I would consider the best option: leave the phrase in question untranslated with a footnote which gives the literal translation and says that the phrase's meaning is unclear but irrelevant.






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    This is the best answer. It leaves the option there for the reader to try to make some sense out of the quotation, if they can.

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In language-related papers, it is common to do all of these options:




  • give the untranslated version

  • give the literal translation

  • give the semantically closest translation in English


Of course it depends how important this particular sentence is to your work. But if you want to mention it, you should at least give the original sentence and a translation in my opinion.






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    Give the loose translation in brackets. For instance, if the original says "This happens once in a blue moon", then give the translation as "This happens [very infrequently]". If you want to be complete, give a footnote with the original German and literal translation.




    So-and-so says "this happens [very infrequently][1]".

    [1]"alle Jubeljahre", literally "once in a blue moon", an idiom expressing extremely low frequency




    (Obviously, this answer is pretending, for the sake of an example, that "alle Jubeljahre" is German idiom that literally translates to "once in a blue moon" but means "infrequently", and is not asserting that this is the case in reality.)






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      "alle Jubeljahre" literally does not translate to "once in a blue moon"

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    Make a judgement call and explain the basis for that call to the reader.






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      Please expand this into a full answer.

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      The question is asking for advice on how to make this judgement call, so I don't see what your answer adds.

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      @DavidRicherby The question actually asks whether to translate it literally or to chose one of the different possible interpretations. I suggest making a judgement call and explaining the basis for that call. That answers the question...

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      @user2768 The question is "Which of these things should I do?" and your answer is that "Choose one of them." Really, that doesn't say anything.

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      @DavidRicherby Well, as it stands, the OP has adopted my answer, academia.stackexchange.com/questions/124908/… So, it is surely reasonable to considered it an answer.

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    After all, it's not what was actually written but my translation, so I feel like this isn't really an option.




    You seem to have unconsciously ruled out what I would consider the best option: leave the phrase in question untranslated with a footnote which gives the literal translation and says that the phrase's meaning is unclear but irrelevant.






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      This is the best answer. It leaves the option there for the reader to try to make some sense out of the quotation, if they can.

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    After all, it's not what was actually written but my translation, so I feel like this isn't really an option.




    You seem to have unconsciously ruled out what I would consider the best option: leave the phrase in question untranslated with a footnote which gives the literal translation and says that the phrase's meaning is unclear but irrelevant.






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      This is the best answer. It leaves the option there for the reader to try to make some sense out of the quotation, if they can.

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    After all, it's not what was actually written but my translation, so I feel like this isn't really an option.




    You seem to have unconsciously ruled out what I would consider the best option: leave the phrase in question untranslated with a footnote which gives the literal translation and says that the phrase's meaning is unclear but irrelevant.






    share|improve this answer














    After all, it's not what was actually written but my translation, so I feel like this isn't really an option.




    You seem to have unconsciously ruled out what I would consider the best option: leave the phrase in question untranslated with a footnote which gives the literal translation and says that the phrase's meaning is unclear but irrelevant.







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      This is the best answer. It leaves the option there for the reader to try to make some sense out of the quotation, if they can.

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      This is the best answer. It leaves the option there for the reader to try to make some sense out of the quotation, if they can.

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    This is the best answer. It leaves the option there for the reader to try to make some sense out of the quotation, if they can.

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    This is the best answer. It leaves the option there for the reader to try to make some sense out of the quotation, if they can.

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    In language-related papers, it is common to do all of these options:




    • give the untranslated version

    • give the literal translation

    • give the semantically closest translation in English


    Of course it depends how important this particular sentence is to your work. But if you want to mention it, you should at least give the original sentence and a translation in my opinion.






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      In language-related papers, it is common to do all of these options:




      • give the untranslated version

      • give the literal translation

      • give the semantically closest translation in English


      Of course it depends how important this particular sentence is to your work. But if you want to mention it, you should at least give the original sentence and a translation in my opinion.






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        In language-related papers, it is common to do all of these options:




        • give the untranslated version

        • give the literal translation

        • give the semantically closest translation in English


        Of course it depends how important this particular sentence is to your work. But if you want to mention it, you should at least give the original sentence and a translation in my opinion.






        share|improve this answer













        In language-related papers, it is common to do all of these options:




        • give the untranslated version

        • give the literal translation

        • give the semantically closest translation in English


        Of course it depends how important this particular sentence is to your work. But if you want to mention it, you should at least give the original sentence and a translation in my opinion.







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            Give the loose translation in brackets. For instance, if the original says "This happens once in a blue moon", then give the translation as "This happens [very infrequently]". If you want to be complete, give a footnote with the original German and literal translation.




            So-and-so says "this happens [very infrequently][1]".

            [1]"alle Jubeljahre", literally "once in a blue moon", an idiom expressing extremely low frequency




            (Obviously, this answer is pretending, for the sake of an example, that "alle Jubeljahre" is German idiom that literally translates to "once in a blue moon" but means "infrequently", and is not asserting that this is the case in reality.)






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              "alle Jubeljahre" literally does not translate to "once in a blue moon"

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            Give the loose translation in brackets. For instance, if the original says "This happens once in a blue moon", then give the translation as "This happens [very infrequently]". If you want to be complete, give a footnote with the original German and literal translation.




            So-and-so says "this happens [very infrequently][1]".

            [1]"alle Jubeljahre", literally "once in a blue moon", an idiom expressing extremely low frequency




            (Obviously, this answer is pretending, for the sake of an example, that "alle Jubeljahre" is German idiom that literally translates to "once in a blue moon" but means "infrequently", and is not asserting that this is the case in reality.)






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              "alle Jubeljahre" literally does not translate to "once in a blue moon"

              – costrom
              Feb 14 at 15:13














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            Give the loose translation in brackets. For instance, if the original says "This happens once in a blue moon", then give the translation as "This happens [very infrequently]". If you want to be complete, give a footnote with the original German and literal translation.




            So-and-so says "this happens [very infrequently][1]".

            [1]"alle Jubeljahre", literally "once in a blue moon", an idiom expressing extremely low frequency




            (Obviously, this answer is pretending, for the sake of an example, that "alle Jubeljahre" is German idiom that literally translates to "once in a blue moon" but means "infrequently", and is not asserting that this is the case in reality.)






            share|improve this answer















            Give the loose translation in brackets. For instance, if the original says "This happens once in a blue moon", then give the translation as "This happens [very infrequently]". If you want to be complete, give a footnote with the original German and literal translation.




            So-and-so says "this happens [very infrequently][1]".

            [1]"alle Jubeljahre", literally "once in a blue moon", an idiom expressing extremely low frequency




            (Obviously, this answer is pretending, for the sake of an example, that "alle Jubeljahre" is German idiom that literally translates to "once in a blue moon" but means "infrequently", and is not asserting that this is the case in reality.)







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              "alle Jubeljahre" literally does not translate to "once in a blue moon"

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              "alle Jubeljahre" literally does not translate to "once in a blue moon"

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            "alle Jubeljahre" literally does not translate to "once in a blue moon"

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            "alle Jubeljahre" literally does not translate to "once in a blue moon"

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            Make a judgement call and explain the basis for that call to the reader.






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              Please expand this into a full answer.

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              The question is asking for advice on how to make this judgement call, so I don't see what your answer adds.

              – David Richerby
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              @DavidRicherby The question actually asks whether to translate it literally or to chose one of the different possible interpretations. I suggest making a judgement call and explaining the basis for that call. That answers the question...

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              @user2768 The question is "Which of these things should I do?" and your answer is that "Choose one of them." Really, that doesn't say anything.

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              @DavidRicherby Well, as it stands, the OP has adopted my answer, academia.stackexchange.com/questions/124908/… So, it is surely reasonable to considered it an answer.

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            Make a judgement call and explain the basis for that call to the reader.






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              Please expand this into a full answer.

              – jakebeal
              Feb 13 at 11:36






            • 25





              The question is asking for advice on how to make this judgement call, so I don't see what your answer adds.

              – David Richerby
              Feb 13 at 15:53






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              @DavidRicherby The question actually asks whether to translate it literally or to chose one of the different possible interpretations. I suggest making a judgement call and explaining the basis for that call. That answers the question...

              – user2768
              Feb 13 at 17:00








            • 12





              @user2768 The question is "Which of these things should I do?" and your answer is that "Choose one of them." Really, that doesn't say anything.

              – David Richerby
              Feb 13 at 17:02






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              @DavidRicherby Well, as it stands, the OP has adopted my answer, academia.stackexchange.com/questions/124908/… So, it is surely reasonable to considered it an answer.

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              Please expand this into a full answer.

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              The question is asking for advice on how to make this judgement call, so I don't see what your answer adds.

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              @DavidRicherby The question actually asks whether to translate it literally or to chose one of the different possible interpretations. I suggest making a judgement call and explaining the basis for that call. That answers the question...

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            • 12





              @user2768 The question is "Which of these things should I do?" and your answer is that "Choose one of them." Really, that doesn't say anything.

              – David Richerby
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              @DavidRicherby Well, as it stands, the OP has adopted my answer, academia.stackexchange.com/questions/124908/… So, it is surely reasonable to considered it an answer.

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              Please expand this into a full answer.

              – jakebeal
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              The question is asking for advice on how to make this judgement call, so I don't see what your answer adds.

              – David Richerby
              Feb 13 at 15:53






            • 6





              @DavidRicherby The question actually asks whether to translate it literally or to chose one of the different possible interpretations. I suggest making a judgement call and explaining the basis for that call. That answers the question...

              – user2768
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            • 12





              @user2768 The question is "Which of these things should I do?" and your answer is that "Choose one of them." Really, that doesn't say anything.

              – David Richerby
              Feb 13 at 17:02






            • 5





              @DavidRicherby Well, as it stands, the OP has adopted my answer, academia.stackexchange.com/questions/124908/… So, it is surely reasonable to considered it an answer.

              – user2768
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            Please expand this into a full answer.

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            The question is asking for advice on how to make this judgement call, so I don't see what your answer adds.

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            The question is asking for advice on how to make this judgement call, so I don't see what your answer adds.

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            @DavidRicherby The question actually asks whether to translate it literally or to chose one of the different possible interpretations. I suggest making a judgement call and explaining the basis for that call. That answers the question...

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            @DavidRicherby The question actually asks whether to translate it literally or to chose one of the different possible interpretations. I suggest making a judgement call and explaining the basis for that call. That answers the question...

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            @user2768 The question is "Which of these things should I do?" and your answer is that "Choose one of them." Really, that doesn't say anything.

            – David Richerby
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            @user2768 The question is "Which of these things should I do?" and your answer is that "Choose one of them." Really, that doesn't say anything.

            – David Richerby
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            @DavidRicherby Well, as it stands, the OP has adopted my answer, academia.stackexchange.com/questions/124908/… So, it is surely reasonable to considered it an answer.

            – user2768
            Feb 13 at 17:10







            @DavidRicherby Well, as it stands, the OP has adopted my answer, academia.stackexchange.com/questions/124908/… So, it is surely reasonable to considered it an answer.

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